There’s no place
like home
Exhausted, I
walked back home. I never really liked my home, my sister would always tease me
and my brother would annoy me. I walked through the rusty tracks and over the
fresh ivy-green grass. I never even had any friends, all I did was be lonely, I
was made fun of at school, but it all changed that day...
I was walking by
when I noticed a cave I had never seen before. I carelessly walked into it. It
was alright at the start but suddenly it emptied out into a bottomless ravine.
I forgot how long I was unconscious. I opened my eyes adjusting to the luminous
light around me. A large figure, the size of a elephant stood in front of me. I
couldn’t recognise them but I guessed they didn’t see too happy about me
landing n their house. I stood up brushing the filthy dust on me. Suddenly I
heard a sound that broke my ears. A large gloomy shadow covered me. He was then
barking out orders to his scared servants. Then he turned to me and I instantly
recognised him.He was the recent evil-doer in Glamesville, his name was Di Yi.
His deathly hook knelt onto my neck, I knew this was the end, or was it? ...
I quickly grabbed
one of the henchmen’s swords while they were counting their stolen loot. The
man walked over commanding an unfortunate prisoner. I quietly cut opened the
rope and ran for my life.
I ran over
exposing the deadly crew into bright sunlight causing them to evaporate into
tiny freckles of dust. I kept running because all I wanted was my family even
though they hated me. I
guess they were my family and family is forever because there’s really “No
Place Like Home!”
WOW cool story Bin I hope you win this competition
ReplyDeleteGood luck
-Ronit